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GROUP CRIT 2


At this moment, I’m selecting which pictures I use for my final series.

»We notice rare blossoms, not the branches and leaves.« Lu Hsun

Selection:

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_LIL3494_1200px
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_LIL2976_2500px
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Not selected:

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Feedback

Generally, this layout does not work. I never planned using this kind of layout for my presentation, but it seems as if it was too distracting for a group crit, that we never got to my actual question. The closest we got was that the darker images are not as appealing to some.

Words that were mentioned:

·    meditative

·    visual poetry

·    ephemeral

Artists that were mentioned:

·    Katrin Koenning (layout)

·    Pat Brassington (people)

·    Rinko Kawauchi (visual poetry)

·    Rosslyn Piggott (I Sense You but I cannot See You)

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