WEEK 5: GROUP CRIT I
O V E R V I E W P H O T O G R A P H S .
Feedback
Suggestion to make additional environment shots (same landscape without the subject). The ladder with the model is too stiff and doesn't make sense (others liked that it's a bit playful). But possibly the ladder without the subject.
The more ambiguous images (without the face) are better.
The detail shot of the back in landscape format is very sensual, feminine and contrasts well with the woody surrounding.
Emphasize texture and shine of clothes.
Body in the grass is good as it's “just a body” but it doesn't quite fit into the series.
References:
- Jane Burton (female in landscape)
- David Bailey
- Patrick Donovan
- Brian Duffy
